What Can I do
To make you happy?
What can I do
To make you see?
What can I do
So your no longer mad?
What can I do
To make you stay?
I wish I knew
What I could do?
I wish I knew
How to please you?
I wish I knew
How much you really care?
I have tried to understand.
Although it never seemed to help.
I have tried to understand
What exactly you wanted.
Please help me understand
What it is you want.
Please help me to know
How much you care.
Please tell me why?
So I may understand.
Please help me know
So I can love you better.
I Love You now,
I Love You Forever.
But how can I
Love you even better?
~ Brandi Kelly
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This is a poem I wrote for my first love back when we were still dating. I was with him for three years and we fought one night and it ended in our break up sadly. I wrote this poem to remember my feelings for him no matter what and to get the hurt I was feeling when we split. I hope those who read this can relate to it somehow. Leave comments please.
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